这是以前老师在BBS上提供的写作范文,可供参考:
Sample writing
Writing
You are expected to write a composition on the topic. You should write around 120 words, and base your composition on the outline given below:
On Dieting
1. More and more people, especially females, are beginning to go on diet;
2. Dieting has a lot of advantages;
3. On the other hand, dieting also has some disadvantages.
上一次的作为练习相信很多同学都已经尝试过了,这里的范文供大家参考,找找自己的毛病,锻炼自己的写作思路。On Dieting
More and more people, especially females, are beginning to go on diet. Some people are concerned with their health, they begin to go on diet in order to lose unwanted weight. But some others, especially the young women, are paying too much attention to their outward appearance, they become the leading members who go on diet.
Dieting is of great benefit to the over-weighted people. First, being over weight is bad for one’s health because it leads to heart disease, high blood pressure, etc. Second, being overweight brings about so much inconvenience to the life of the over-weighted people and dieting enables them to enjoy life more.
On the other hand, dieting also has some disadvantages. For one thing, many people diet not because they really want to live a healthy life, but because they only want to keep slim. In this way, they will suffer from malnutrition. For another, Dieters lead a miserable life because they are forever hungry and, at the same time, they have to go through the misery of watching others enjoy three meals a day.
品味一些作文的范文
想一想如果自己写会怎样写
Writing Passage 1. Write a composition in no less 100 words about ADVERTISEMENTS. You are required to arrange your idea in three paragraphs with key words for each paragraph given.
The following are the key words and expressions you may use in your composition:
advertise, depend on, consumer, manufacturer, salesman, product, to some extent, success, failure; different, newspaper, TV, radio, billboard, agency, service; however, truthful, misrepresent, exaggerate, benefit, fall victim, satisfied.
Sample
Advertisements are getting their way into people's lives. People depend on advertisers in their daily lives because they are consumers. The advertisers are always manufacturers. Sometimes they are salesmen. Their merchandise needs advertising. Thus nearly every product is advertised. To some extent, good advertising means success while bad advertising can means failure.
There are many ways to advertise and 'ads' come in different forms. Newspapers carry advertisements. Some products are announced on TV and radio which have a wide audience. Billboards also carry advertising. Advertising is a big industry now and many agencies are set up to furnish a variety of services for it.
However, advertising is not always truthful. A product is often misrepresented. The advertiser exaggerates the benefits of the merchandise he wants to sell. Thus, he misrepresents the truth. The consumer falls victim to such advertising. Millions of people have bought advertised products and they haven't always been satisfied.
Writing Passage 2. Write a composition on the topic VACATION, LONG OR SHORT?. In some universities, students have 3 semesters, in others, 2 semesters, but longer. There are people who favor the short vacation and also people preferring the long one.
Explain your viewpoint in no less than 100 words.
Sample
Some people favor long vacations because they can have enough time to do things that cannot be finished within a short period. During a long vacation, they may make a complicated experiment, carry out an involved investigation or go to a faraway place for some necessary field work. Taking a full time job to earn money for one or two months is another benefit the long vacation provides. And sometimes a good academic thesis with a considerable length needs a long vacation.
Those who prefer short vacations also have understandable reasons. For two or three weeks' rest is adequate for students to refresh themselves without forgetting the lessons that are to be continued next semester. Short vacations also mean to rest three times a school year and short semesters. To study in this way is easier than to study for a long exhausting time with many courses and lessons crammed together.
One the whole, either long or short vacation has its advantages and disadvantages. What matters is how to make use of it.
Writing Passage 3. EXAMINATION
You are given the first sentence of each paragraph and required to develop its idea in completing the paragraph. Writing about 35 words for each paragraph, not including the words given. Therefore, your part of the composition should be about 100 words.
-There are many arguments about the advantages of examination.
-For both examiners and examinees, the examination can show what and how much the exam needs have mastered.
-In sum, the examination does more good than harm for both examiners and examinees.
Sample
There are many arguments about the advantages and disadvantages of examination. Some people think examination is the only best way to test how examinees have mastered what they have studied and it is the only measurement for examiners to select which persons they need. While, on the other hand, some object that examination can't measure how the students have really studied. They say it can do nothing but burden the students.
As for me, I think for both examiners and examinees, the examination can show what and how much the examinees have mastered. The results of examinations are just like mirrors for both examiners and examinees.
Through examination the examinees can check their work and get aware of which aspects they have not done well, so that they'll make much improvement in their work. As far as examinees are concerned, they can not only know how they have studied but also find out what they still unknown or what they haven't mastered well. Thus, they will be inspired to greater efforts to improve their studying method so as to make greater progress. Of course too many examinations are burdens to both examiners and examinees.
In sum, the examination does more good than harm for both examiners and examinees. We must take a correct attitude towards examination. We should take full advantage of it and avoid its disadvantage.
Writing Passage 4. POSITIVE AND NEGATIVE ASPECTS OF SPORTS
You should write no less than 100 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese)below.
(1)运动的积极因素
(2)运动的消极因素
(3)你的体会
Sample
Sports benefit us in many respects. When taking part in sports, we get the chance to train almost all parts of our bodies. There is no doubt that proper sports activities keep our physical fitness. Furthermore, sports can enrich our life and maintain our psychological health. Through participation, everyone can learn that on the playground he not only struggles for himself but also fights for his team. Sports teach us about consideration, cooperation and optimism to failure.
But sports can do some harm to those who cannot plan their activities properly. Too hard training may hurt their bodies, exhaust their vigor, and even cause them to become sick.
In general, I love sports. I enjoy sports. For sports not only help me to live a well-balanced life, but also provide me with opportunities to get closer to nature. Sports add happiness to my everyday life when I perform in a decent way.
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